In Poutama, we opt in to which Writing session interests us the most. On Tuesday, Mrs Lunn took a Writing Workshop on writing a moment in time recount of scoring the winning goal.
We had lots of friends opt in to attend this session.
This was Mrs Lunn's writing that she showed us. We had to tell her what we liked about her story. Mrs Lunn coloured them in gold. Then we told her what we thought she could improve on and she coloured them in green.
Then it was our turn to write ...
The clock was counting down. Who would be the champ and win the 2018 world cup? I hope it's the french. focus you can do this you've trained for this. The black and white sphere rolled right towards me. I knew what I had to do this will be the most important kick of my life. I boot the ball and it's a goal!
By Kaleb
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