Mrs Lunn's favourite story of the day was written by Mason. It is called Apple Wars. Have a read and see if you can figure out what Mason did to make Mrs Lunn love his story so much. Maybe you could tell us what you like about the story in the comments section below.
28.7.22 - Apple wars
The bell rang, I could hear the stampede coming for me. The doors burst open, students flooded in to get their lunch, I wish I hadn't gone to lunch early. Once I had managed to get my lunchbox out, I pushed my way through the students to the shelter of the deck, lucky I packed some apples myself. I grabbed my apple and prepared for war… That's when I felt something hit me. I turned around, a singular apple had hit me. "That was ani-climati..." Suddenly a barrage of apples was hurled towards me. It was an ambush!
By Mason. Lewis
Mason went over to the office to share his writing and got a Prinicpal's Award! Woo hoo! Go Mason!
I love the bit where you said that the children were 'stampeding'
nice job mason