Liam wrote the best story of his life today!
He is making wonderful choices as a writer by choosing the best possible verbs, nouns and adjectives to use. When you read Liam's story, you can imagine the story taking place. That's was a great writer does! Well done Liam. We are so proud of you.
The Invitation by Liam V
I open the door carefully in case of any traps. BANG! The door shuts behind me. A cold shiver runs down my spine and I feel a big lump in my throat. I pull my phone out of my pocket. I need to record this.
The floor was shaking and a gigantic wall with hieroglyphics appeared. In front of my eyes were heaps of coffins and a huge staircase going up to the mummy queen. As I was climbing up the stairs I saw spiders and snakes and cockroaches crawling and slithering desperate food some food.
I kept on climbing up the stairs when finally made it to the top. There was a rusty,old, metal puzzle lying in front of me. I decided to do it. After hours of planning, I knew how to do it.
"Last block," I sighed and put it in. Nothing happened then the ground started shaking again. The coffins were opening and the mummies were slowly sitting up.
"What did I cause...?"
Good job liam V you must have been working hard